In the Holidays I went to my cosins house and went to church
for the confrince then after that me and my family and cosins
was going too have a feed at KFC then we started eating I was
eating coke and chips after that we went back to our uncales
house and then we did a prary after that we went home my
brother stayed over our antys house then I was playing fortnight
for the confrince then after that me and my family and cosins
was going too have a feed at KFC then we started eating I was
eating coke and chips after that we went back to our uncales
house and then we did a prary after that we went home my
brother stayed over our antys house then I was playing fortnight
Hi my name is Fern and I go to Mangonui school.I like your work but next time when you seed I was eating coke and chips instead of saying eating coke you can say drinking coke. You need to put punctuation in because I ran out of breath. I love your work and I sometimes stay at my antys house to.
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